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2018.01.06
In many countries, more and more people buy a wider range of household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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Olina
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With the rapid development of technology胡荃 , people around the global have easilygained more accesses toa wide range ofsuch household goods as television, microwave oven and rice cooker.Some peopleare ready to embrace the new trend,whileothers would say no to this.From my personal perspective, I wouldside myself withthe former groupfor the following reasons.
In regard tothe television,no one can deny the fact?that TVestablishes itself asone of the most significant inventions in the 20thcentury.Not only can itplay?the role ofentertainment, italsoserves asa major channel tobroaden the horizonforthose whoarenotblessed tohavethe chances to see in personwhat the outside world exactly looks like是否爱过我 ?.
①：双重否定
②：倒装句
③：定语从句镶嵌宾语从句
In the case ofmicrowave,itis endowed withoverwhelming merits,too.As we all now live ina fast-paced society, an increasing number of people have to turn tothe goods that offer them theutmostconvenience and efficiency王麒诚?. Microwave serves as a perfect example to meet the need ofworking people who may have little time to eat, in particular, the lunchtime?.What people need to do is?to put meals in, close the door黄誉博 , press the button, wait for several minutes张京雅 , tick, tick肖艳琴 , tick then everything is done! The meal is ready within a very short time---highly time-efficient.
④：定语从
⑤：定语从句
⑥：主语从句
In a word,the newly developedhome appliancesbring much we need,sowe can safely drawthe conclusion thatit is a positive development without any doubt?.
⑦：同位语从句
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Para 1
Gain access to> have
Eg. Some group still have difficulty gaining access to health care
A wide range of> many
Eg. We stock a wide range of office furniture.
Be ready to do> like
Eg. She is always ready to help.
Embrace> accept
Eg. Most countries have enthusiastically embraced the
The initiative ofOne Belt One Road
Side oneself with> agree with
Eg. She always sides with my brother.
Para 2
Establish oneself as> is
Eg. China has established herself as the world’s second largest economy.
Serve as> work as
Eg. It’s been my honor to serve as the finance minister.
Be blessed to do>be lucky to do
Eg. The son of the doctor is blessed to have money.
Para 3
Be endowed with> have
Eg. China is endowed with a rich natural resources.
Overwhelming> great
Eg. I have the overwhelming desire to leave.
Time-efficient> time-saving
Eg. High-speed bullet train is time-efficient.
Para 4
Safely
Eg. We can safely assume that she was not there that night.
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